Amagove gave me the words blood, pain, a little baby, and emptiness to explain the loss of a child for my interactive poetry. I have never experienced this, but here is what I came up with.
She looked down at the blood stained bed,
staring at the shades of brown and red.
Her hands trembled as she wiped her tears.
She never thought she would have to face this fear.
Thoughts of could have been’s and if only’s
filled her mind, as her soul grew lonely.
This emptiness enveloped all of her being
as her heart sank to the silence of his not beating.
Something so small- a little baby
and the hope of maybe… just maybe
caused so much pain in this mother’s heart
that it clenched onto her spirit and tore her apart.
If you have words you would like me to use in a poem, comment on here or on my interactive poetry post and I’ll be glad to write something and link you to the post!
Photo Credit: http://www.covenantfamilysolutions.com/miscarriages-pain-lingers/
So powerful work !! Brilliant
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it!
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You’re most welcm
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Beautiful words portraying such pain.
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Mijn Verhaal and commented:
Look at the beautiful statuette! Beautiful poem also!
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I’m glad you like it, and thank you for the reblog!
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Am speechless. This is so amazing. Can I reblog it?
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I’m glad you think so! And of course! 🙂
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Very sad Blair. I’m sad for the individual who suggested the words and experienced the loss.
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Me too. Losing a child is probably the most difficult thing anyone could face in life.
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Reblogged this on amagove.
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