I took the allergic to ‘e’ challenge from Alisha.
I had a hard time not using the word “the” haha, not using ‘e’ is is a lot more difficult than I figured it would be!
Sound surrounds
my passing thoughts.
Waiting until
my mind is caught-
Caught by strings
wrapping around my brain,
pulling my passions
and plucking at my pain.
I ask for this sound
to finally stop,
but it only says
that it’s all my fault-
My fault that sound
has a way of invading
my mind
and always staying
in my soul.
Wondrful pom. You ar unstoppabl π
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Haha, I see what you did there. Thank you!
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Vry Clvr..
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“the strings” – just leave “the” π
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Ah I need to fix that! Haha it’s so hard
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It wasn’t on my hand written one, but when I typed it I added it in lol. I read through It like 50 times and never even noticed.
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Haha. Perfect now! π
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Nice though!
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Thank you!
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I knew you would finally get this challenge. You nailed it! More so than I haha.
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Haha I saw it just a few days after you mentioned it. It’s pretty hard! Glad you liked it π
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Don’t take my “E!” Nice challenge! -OM
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Thanks for the reblog! π
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No thanks necessary! π
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Awesome poem and awesome concept. π
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I thought it was a nice challenge haha, thank you!
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Impressive indeed π
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Thank you!!
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Great job! You continue to find ways to amaze me!
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Haha thanks! You should try this, it’s hard-but pretty fun!
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I think I might once I get past the play this week. You always come up with such innovative ideas. I steal them sometimes, but always give you credit!
We haven’t chatted in a while so I hope all is well for you.
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Well I heard of this one about a week ago, then came across Alisha’s post and decided to try it. What’s blogging for if you can’t borrow others’ ideas? Haha
And yeah! I’m doing pretty well. You?
I was actually thinking earlier today about messaging you on Facebook/email about collaborating again sometime soon.
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It is great to be inspired by others. I often get inspired by the writings that I see and want to put my own spin on it. You are at the top of that list. Your pieces constantly amaze me.
Definitely. I am up for that. I am in Shakespeare’s “A Midsummer Night’s Dream” in a local community theatre here. Our first show is Thursday. It is a lot of fun but very time consuming.
I also got hurt in the gym and had to take some time off which has really stunk. I got sick so I took about 5 weeks off and am ready to get back in there now. Hopefully Saturday!
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I do the same thing and thank you! I’m glad you like them.
I would love to do some sort of theater, but don’t have the time/energy/talent haha. Good luck with it!
And I’m sorry, glad you’re getting better though!
We should talk soon, you can message me whenever you want! And I’ll let you know when I’ve got a chance to collaborate and we can just work on that whenever we have free time π
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It is a beautiful poem. I could feel tension plucking at my “where is the e” strings reading it. I love to feel a poem, so that was wonderful. x
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Thank you! I’m glad that it resonated with you in some way π
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This is one of the best e-challenge work i have seen so far π terrific π
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It’s a hard one! Haha thank you!
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Blair King has done it again!
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Haha π
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Blair, you are so talented! Love reading your work π
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Thank you so much! π
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