In my hand, I’ve placed the knife
that constantly stabs at my blurring conscience.
Should I feel guilty
for this intended murder?
Or should my method be applauded?
For to myself, I have surrendered.
In my hand, I’ve placed the knife
that constantly stabs at my blurring conscience.
Should I feel guilty
for this intended murder?
Or should my method be applauded?
For to myself, I have surrendered.
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Wow – powerful stuff. It’s the first piece of you I’ve read. Makes me want to read more. Thanks
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Thank you! So glad you liked it 🙂
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Like it! 🙂
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Thanks!!
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this one real livid fam. Nice
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Thank you!
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I like it but I am not sure of your meaning.
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It means that I am constantly testing my own conscience, my morals, etc. I am my own rival.
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This is definitely one of my favorites!!♡
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Thank you! I wasn’t sure about it, I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
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I really did. It’s funny how tge ones we are not sure about are often our most honest.
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Yeah, that’s usually how it seems to be on here. My least favorites are the ones everyone else loves haha.
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My personal favorites of my own writing are usually the least liked. I wonder what phenomenon that could be??!!
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Haha, same here! It’s definitely strange.
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very well penned
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Thanks!!
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Beautiful stuff.
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Thank you!
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surrendering to yourself.. now that’s a thought
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Yeah, I seem to quite often. Different thoughts, feelings, or sides of me will battle one another until finally one surrenders.
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Life is full of opportunity costs.. if we select one choice we miss out on the next best alternative.. so yeah at the end of the day.. one side has to reign victor
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Exactly. In a way, you’re always in a constant struggle against yourself.
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Short write but epic intent in those words, me like very much
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It was originally going to be much longer, but I ended up saying all I needed to say in the first stanza. So I just left it as is. Glad you liked it!
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Beautiful writing
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Thank you!
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