All the time I feel the air.
Breezing by, everywhere.
Can it feel me? Does it notice me?
Does anyone, anywhere really care to see?
Everywhere I go, there’s no feeling of space.
Free from the toxins that impale this place.
Gone are the times of solitude and innocence.
Here is the now, the age of dissonance.
I walk among the reckless and the recluse.
Just those who are already stuck in the noose.
Kindly floating by, observing society.
Listening to the lack of sincere propriety.
Missing their voice, which got caught in the wind.
Nothing’s right, we’re trying too hard to blend.
Only to discover it’s us who are the plague- blurring among the faces, all too vague.
People who fall to greed and lust,
Quiver so slightly in the air like dust.
Rising through the storm are the few.
Sickness has settled on us all like dew.
Trying to win this fight-
Useless among both the bright and the blight.
Vehemently stretching with no success,
Will never supply us with happiness.
X’ing through our heart’s true desires
Yearning for something behind the fires.
Zoning ourselves far, far away- seems much safer when you have too much to say.
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I love this…
“Here is the now, the age of dissonance.
I walk among the reckless and the recluse.”
It’s great, keep it up.
I have some drafts like that, but I need to edit them or only I’d understand them hahaha, I still find mistakes in my posts. keep them coming, Blair.
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Haha, thanks! I just wrote the alphabet, then wrote a line out from each, whatever came to mind first. I didn’t have any certain subject I was trying to write about, just a challenge I did during my couple minutes of free time at work. I need to start editing before I post, but I don’t really have enough time in the day. So most of my poems are one draft and took 5-10 minutes at most.
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Oh, wow, you sure did! That is especially cool!
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I feel we have the same hearts…
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“Gone are the times of solitude and innocence.
Here is the now, the age of dissonance.”
This one is like reading a poem written by a modern day Emily Dickinson.
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That’s probably one of the best comments I’ve ever received haha, thank you!! And thank you for the reblog! 🙂
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you’re most welcome. It’s always a pleasure reading your poetry 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoy it! 🙂
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What a wonderful exercise. Your talent is unbelievable.
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It was a really good exercise. You should try it! It really makes you think and you have to rework words quite a bit to make it flow and make sense, lol. And thank you!
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I’d like to give it a try.
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Blair, this is amazing and right on topic for today’s society. You need to submit it to submit it to PSA (Poetry Society of America) https://www.poetrysociety.org/ Your talent is A+amazing!
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Wow! Thank you! I’ve never heard of that, I’ll look into it!!
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Umm I wanted to ask you something. Rather silly, but still. How did you get an old post of yours to reappear on the reader?
Like you have written it earlier, but here it is showing that you uploaded it two hours ago, how did you do it?
I’ll really appreciate your help. Thank you!
Regards, insight07 / Devika 🙂
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You go to your posts, and change it to draft, then update it. Then, change it to publish and change the date and time you want it to be posted. I don’t know if there’s an easier way or not. Haha
And no problem!
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Okay.. Sounds sort of complicated. I’ll give it a try. Thanks! You’re a sweetheart 😛
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I just tried it. You can do it without changing it into a draft. Just directly you can publish it on a different date and all 😀
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I’ve tried, but it won’t work for me. Maybe it’s because I’m on the mobile app.
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Even I am on the mobile app. Give it a try. 🙂
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Hm, I wonder what was wrong with it. I’ve had an update since I’ve tried, so maybe that’s what was wrong. I’ll try right now.
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Haha, sure!
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When I do that, it shows up under blogs I follow, but not under the tags. I think that was the problem I had before. But when i change it to Draft and back to publish, it reposts like it’s never been posted before.
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Okay. As long as it works, any way is fine. 😛
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Also this piece is brilliant, I absolutely love it!💫
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Thank you!! And thanks for the reblog!
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AWESOME PHOTO
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An alphabet of Awareness
by Blair King
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This just struck me this morning. Thought provoking stuff, dude.
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Thank you for the reblog! Glad you liked it 🙂
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The storm against humanity. Well done, Poet 🙂
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I still don’t consider myself a poet, haha. But thank you 🙂
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Wow… This is just a beautiful and complete poetry…. I just love your style of writing….
” gone are the times of solitude and innocence,
Here is now the age of dissonance”
Its splendid !!!!
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Thank you! I love the more archaic forms of poetry. This is actually the fist full poem I had ever written and it’s by far my favorite. I don’t think I’ll ever top it hahaha. I’m glad you like it 🙂
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I loved this and then you said you did it using the alphabet – wow, amazing, will have to try doing that and see what comes out. Thank you for following my blog and enabling me to discover your wonderful site. Kay
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Yeah, I need to give it a shot again. It was one of my first attempts at poetry and I needed something to help me get started. It had absolutely no meaning as I wrote it and I went back and read it and just thought to myself, “wow, it makes sense” haha. Thank you, I’m glad you like it! 🙂
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Hi Blair hope you don’t mind but I had a go at an A to Z poem – The Strawberry Effect – on my blog today and I mentioned your blog where I got the idea from. No idea why I chose fruit! a for apple I suppose lol
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Of course I don’t mind! That’s one reason I love blogging- you get to share your little tricks and tools with others and they get to share theirs with you, haha.
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Thanks Blair 🙂
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Beautiful stuff 😃
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Thank you!!
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This is awesome, thank you for sharing your amazing work!
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Thank you for reading it!
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The alphabet… damn 😀
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Hahaha, it’s fun! You should try it 🙂
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tooo brilliant !!!!!
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Thank you!!
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Thank you for the reblog! 🙂
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God! My WordPress sucks!
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Lol, why?
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Thanks for the reblog!
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It desserved the reblog!
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Indeed I too will re blog this
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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this is beautiful guys..
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Cleverly penned, starting each line in the order of the alphabet! Amazing!
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Thank you! I just wrote the alphabet and went with whatever came out! Haha
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A-Z has it all :’)
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I’m surprised at what I thought of with simply writing the alphabet down. Haha 🙂
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That’s some Grade A stuff, damn good
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Wow. Just wow.
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🙂
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Brilliant writing
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Thank you!!
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Beautiful! Well done!
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Thank you!
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the alphabets…..didn’t even realize it until the end…I Like!
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Haha, yeah! Thanks!
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Really nice focus and powerful words.
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Thank you!
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For far too long I’ve seen your quiet observation of my posts and simultaneously not bothered to read yours. Not purposely. Now in reading I see I’ve robbed myself of some fine poetry. I’d like to sum up how impressed I am with your ability to convey thoughts, emotions, etc. Alas I’m speechless. Which is a great imposition for a writer, but in this instance a welcome state. For silence best conveys awe whilst allowing for more reading. 🙂
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Looooooove it !!!!
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Thank you!! 🙂
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