Knowing me
is such as knowing
a tree
One sure thing,
then I fray.
Each limb-
Each branch
tells a story
that may change
day by day.
Knowing me
is such as knowing
a bee.
I buzz about
-not taking kindly
to those who blindly
swat me away.
My buzzes are thoughts
transformed into rambles
I’m too afraid to shout.
So I say them quietly,
respecting propriety.
and whisper to myself.
Knowing me
is such as knowing
a key.
I unlock
what’s behind each door.
But the locks keep changing,
as people always do.
So more and more
get the key.
But what does it uncover?
Probably nothing.
-For knowing me
is such as knowing
a tree.
Each limb-
Each branch
tells a different story.
Ah, Blair. You’ve done it again. My own Emily Dickinson. *bows down*
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Ahh, haha thank you! I love that comparison! π
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I truly love reading your words! So much depth and the way you can pull your reader in! Amazing!
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Thank you so much! That really means a lot! I’m so glad you enjoy my work π
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It’s my pleasure! It’s important to acknowledge creativity and the beauty within those creations!
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π I’m glad you enjoy them and think that they’re worth acknowledging.
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Really beautiful! π
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Thank you!! π
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Reblogged this on poetstateofmind.
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Class A on the style and format, with great lines to boot
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it π I just kind of make up my own style haha.
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A poem with lot of depth in it π I just loved these lines “For knowing me is such as knowing a tree.
Each limb-Each branch tells a different story. ” Beautiful π
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Thank you! It started out at a dumb little rhyme. I didn’t even realize what it meant until after I finished it haha. π
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π sometimes words carry you rather than you carrying them π
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They sure can π
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Very deep, very powerful. I love this one a lot, you’ve placed each word perfectly and put together an incredible poem. Wonderful work Blair. π
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Thank you very much! This was one that I didn’t try with at all. I just wrote it straight out in a few minutes. I had no meaning behind it other than boredom and I was shocked that it made sense haha. I’m really glad you enjoyed it π
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Wow! Great poetry. And I loved the closure.
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it π
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Creative poem Blair! Happy birthday!!
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Thank you, Alisha! π
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Love reading your poems… you are so talented! Keep them coming π
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Thank you, I’m really glad that you like them! It means a lot π
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