Danica gave me the words sophistication, knife, mud, and glasses for my interactive poetry.
For some reason, I had an extremely hard time coming up with something for these words. But, here’s what I came up with!
Our weapons of choice
will decide our voice-
Whether our lives are heard
or felt.
A sense of sophistication
can elude from the barrel of a gun.
The loud, sudden sound
warns of what’s been dealt.
Yet the silence of a knife
can end a life
with no noise to be made-
but the pain will surely show.
But once your weapon
has been chosen
and you put it to use,
the storm inside will grow.
Puddles will appear
as contorted looking glasses
twisting and conforming
your once familiar face
into something unknown.
Your mind will begin to flood
as the ground turns to mud.
You can’t seem to stand straight.
You slip and you stumble-
as you’re sinking-
as you’re drowning.
Drowning in the depths
of your once clear thoughts
Drowning into the darkness
clouding your judgment.
The choice is not
whether or not to choose a weapon.
It’s which weapon
you’d rather use.
“Our weapons of choice/ will decide our voice” – what a powerful opening! Great poem. I love the imagery and alliteration you used.
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it!
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Great poem! Whenever you compliment my work, it means a lot seeing how talented you are š I’ve nominated you for a challenge. I’d love to see your take on it! Check here for details: https://kasimskorner.wordpress.com/2015/07/21/the-missing-key-challenge-response-story/
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Thank you! And I’ll try to do that when I get a chance! Thank you for the nomination š
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Loved the poem.. But how dare you use the weapon of intellect, compassion, empathy and understanding to fight the Devils of aggression
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Thank you, but what do you mean?
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Sorry it seems to be an error in my programming that I say the opposite of what I mean for mild comedic effect, provocation and mental rabble rousing. This only applies to the first half of my second sentence in my first comment š
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I’m still not sure what you’re trying to say… lol
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I think I was attempting to say that you put forward a beautiful expression of the inherent issues of engaging in violence as a response to an upset and you do this with intelligence, compassion, empathy and insight..
Going to try and practice saying what I mean…..
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Oohhhh hahaha, I was reading it in a completely different way and I was having a hard time grasping your concept. I see what you’re saying now lol. I’m sorry.
I thought you understood my poem completely wrong and took it offensively. But what you said was exactly what I was trying to express. Thank you haha.
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I like to provide a challenge.. Glad we got there in the end.. I hope the journey was interesting. š
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I see that! Me too, and it was haha š
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Friggin great little write, nailed the words you were given
I creep with jaded vision, the graves of forgotten memories underfoot as blood red glasses paint all the same shade of guilt and shame
Edges of blades refine to simple truths the sophistication of our lies, the mud like remains of better intentions stain with as much pain
But the damning remark of a true slice of hell, which creeps on graveyards and keeps happy resurgence underfoot, stains the days
Is in the knife I place between the skin of your back, the blackened ooze of corrupted visions that runs down the skin and tastes of sin
I am what the world created and with remorseless robotic minds I will pay back the debt, with no such pity and ruthless charm
So if you see the gleam of a smile on the twisted face I project, it is just the happiness I wish to kill, reflecting off the knife you drove deep
My back you made bleed
My hope you killed
Now I must return the favour
And take the broken fragments you owe me
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“I am what the world created…”- I love that. You did a really great job!
And thank you! These words were really difficult for me for some reason haha.
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Reblogged this on The Dirty Diaries and commented:
Just got the time to reblog and share this with you all. I gave Blair a pretty random group of words but as always, her incredible talent can pull I think even the most unlikely words! Great job!
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Thank you!! I’m really glad you enjoyed it š
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